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Darby Jones's avatar

"I can’t stand it when dogs watch you fuck. They just look like they are enjoying it too much."

You really know how to relate to normal people.

"Aren’t we just like fish? Aren’t we this drop of consciousness trapped in the body?"

I suppose so.

"We are as horrific" or become horrific? Maybe the drop of consciousness becomes whatever body it's in.

"or whatever"

"whatever that means."

We already know you're a cynic and question shit. A 24-7 thought gauntlet. You told us once. You don't have to tell us every time. Otherwise, it's a fuckload better than everything I've read here, except for Mike Knittel. I can't even touch his freak literature.

Cheers ... or whatever ;)

Fat Ball's avatar

Should banged the ginger and let her dog watch.

David Perlmutter's avatar

Oh, this is one of your NOVELS! I thought this was another one of your profane stream-of-consciousness e-mail essays...

Caroline Osella   (they/them)'s avatar

I've read the book. Loved it.

David Angel's avatar

I don’t care what it is, who the fuck needs Salinger and all that crap with Frank back